IELTS writing task 2 - Some people say that parents should decide on what kind of medical care their children should receive, while others believe that this is the state's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 Some people say that parents should decide on what kind of medical care their children should receive, while others believe that this is the state's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


While there is a general consensus regarding the importance of providing children with optimal healthcare, there is ongoing debate regarding whether parents or the government should have the authority to determine the nature of that care. In my opinion, although governments may establish overarching policies for children's medical care, parents should typically retain the final decision-making power.


There are valid arguments in favor of state intervention in determining the form of medical provision for children. Firstly, the government often possesses access to the latest medical research, enabling them to make more informed decisions. Additionally, in cases of epidemics within schools, it becomes the government's responsibility to prevent the unnecessary spread of illnesses. In such instances, it may be justifiable for the government to enforce compulsory vaccination measures.


On the other hand, there is a compelling argument for granting parents the authority to decide on the healthcare their receive. A crucial principle is that individuals should have the to choose the care they receive, and for young children who are incapable of making their own decisions, it is natural for their parents to assume that responsibility. This becomes particularly significant in families that adhere to a cultural or religious framework that prohibits certain medical interventions, such as blood transfusions. In such cases, it would be inappropriate for the government to mandate actions that contradict religious beliefs.


In conclusion, while I acknowledge the merits of state involvement in outlining children's healthcare, I believe that parents should have the final say, particularly when religious principles are involved.

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